New Critical explication for "The Death
of the Ball Turret Gunner"
- Randall Jarrell's poem "The Death of the
Ball Turret Gunner," though only five lines in length, stands as
one of the most powerful anti-war poems ever written.
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- Reading the first line, one pauses
slightly after "sleep," dividing the line in half. The halves make
a sharp contrast. The point of transition in this line is "I
fell", a helpless movement from the mother to the State, from
sleep to the State. The mother and the State make an evident
contrast, and so do "sleep" and "the State", which resemble each
other in their first sound and in their position at the end of a
half-line but which have such different associations, for sleep is
comforting and the State is associated with totalitarianism. ("The
country" or "the land" might be comforting and nourishing, but
"the State" has no such warm suggestions.)
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- We will soon see in the poem that life
in the "belly" of the State unnaturally cramps the man in its icy
belly. He "hunched in its belly" until his "wet fur froze." We
gather from the title that "its" refers not only to the State but
also to the airplane in whose womblike ball turret held his
confined existence and died. Given the title, the fur probably
literally refers to the fur collar of the jackets that fliers wore
in World War II, and it also suggests the animal like existence he
led while confined by this unfeeling foster parent, the
State-airplane. His unnatural existence is further emphasized by
the fact that, in the airplane, he was "Six miles from earth."
From such an existence, far from the "dream of life" that people
hope for, and still hunched in the turret like a baby in the womb,
he was born again, that is, he awoke to (or became aware of) not a
rich fulfillment of the dream but a horrible reality that is like
a nightmare. "Woke to black flak" imitates, in its rattling k's at
the ends of words, the sound of the gunfire that simultaneously
awakened and killed him. His awakening or birth is to a
nightmarish reality and death.
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- It is not surprising, but it is
certainly horrifying, that in this world of an impersonal State
that numbs and destroys life, his body is flushed out of the
turret with a hose. This is the third horrible release: the first
was from the mother into the State; the second was from the belly
of the State into the belly of the airplane; and now in shreds
from the belly of the airplane into nothing, an act of metaphoric
abortion. That this life-history is told flatly, with no note of
protest, of course increases the horror. The simplicity of the
last line, more effectively brings out the horror of the
experience than an anguished cry or angry protest could do.
Adapted from Sylvan Barnet. Writing About Literature , 204-206.
Consider your interpretation as an argument.
This means you must support a central claim with textual evidence and
avoid falsifying anomalies. Your central claim should be a
synthesizing statement that relates parts to the whole.